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背景介紹：

Young Entrepreneurs
(Some of the) Most Successful Entrepreneurs of our Time and Their (Age):
Founders of Google: Sergey Brin(25) & Larry Page (25)
Founders of Apple: Steve Jobs (21) & Steve Wozniak (26)
Founders of Microsoft: Bill Gates (20) & Paul Allen (22)
Founder of Facebook: Mark Zuckerberg (20)
Founder of Wal-Mart: Sam Walton (26)
科技時代的到來讓越來越多的年輕人看到了潛在的機(jī)會而選擇創(chuàng)業(yè)作為自己的一條出路，其中不乏成功者，有人認(rèn)為創(chuàng)業(yè)風(fēng)險大，年輕人毫無經(jīng)驗(yàn)，成功的可能性微乎其微；也有人認(rèn)為年輕人有干勁有夢想而更容易成功，對此，你怎么看呢?

話題：

Topic1: What's your opinion on young entrepreneurs?
Topic2: Have you ever thought about start your own business?

范例1：

It seems in current times, young entrepreneurs are more likely to gain a chance to stand out than in old days, especially in internet field. The information technology takes us into an era we have never heard or seen before. We are lucky to live in a world where an idea can be easily carried out into real project because of endless free resources. Youngsters have nothing to lose. On the contrary, those older people will consider the stark reality of losing the comforts of life that they have worked hard to build up during their career. In this way, young people are more likely to choose to start their own business. Besides, since they have nothing to lose, they tend to be more innovative when coming up a resolution and have more energy to consistently burn the midnight candle. However, for young entrepreneurs, their ill-experience may drag them down at first, so keeping their dream alive after countless failures is crucial and precious.
范例2：

It always takes years for the youth to realize that reality is so harsh thus dream is so grey in comparison. After university graduation, countless students choose to start their own business despite the severe employment situation. Courage need to take as well as risks, which is why we ordinary people admire those who establish a business from the bottom of our hearts. Sadly, numerous start-ups fell at last and only a few survive and thrive. However, in a broad vision, it is those pioneers who lead the new economy and drive the economic boom. Perhaps that is the profound meaning of young people doing their own business.

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