托福寫作該圍繞哪些觀點進行
你是不是也不太了解托福獨立寫作的思路應(yīng)該如何拓寬,總覺得翻來覆去無非就是那幾個角度,很難突破創(chuàng)新?;蛘呤菍懙揭话胨悸房D,甚至覺得自己給出的觀點不夠恰當,沒有說服力。到底該怎么拿到高分,下面的內(nèi)容你可以看看。
有很多考托福的同學在面對獨立寫作的時候都覺得寫作拿到高分甚至滿分是一件很困難的事情。用好下面說到的7個萬金油理由,以后面對陌生的話題,或者是思路枯竭的時候再也不用急了!
但是無論題干如何變化,你都可以嘗試使用這7個萬能理由:
effectiveness and efficiency/有效性
economy and finance/經(jīng)濟
technology and internet/科技和互聯(lián)網(wǎng)
health and environment/健康與環(huán)境
culture and globalization/文化與全球化
social relationship/社交關(guān)系
career development/職業(yè)發(fā)展
用這些觀點和題干結(jié)合,生成新的觀點,接下來就拿一道題舉例,告訴大家這7個萬金油如何應(yīng)用在具體的寫作中:
題干
Government should invest more in education than infrastructure to improve the society?
這道題我們可以從萬能思路中Effectiveness這個思路入手,那么大的觀點就是:Education is more effective than infrastructure in changing the world.
這是一個high level的觀點,比較宏觀,接下來我們要做的就是narrow down, 將一個high level的觀點narrow成一個middle level的觀點:
it is more effective for the government to invest in education than infrastructure because such an act generates greater long-term welfare.
有middle level的觀點之后,大家需要仔細的解釋一下,補充一些細節(jié):
In the long term, people will be able to learn more knowledge, enhance their professional skills, and change the world they live in, instead of simply enjoying easier rides to wherever they would like to go. This is exactly the reason why we should spend more in education.
最后,將他們放在一起,就可以組成一個段落啦:
Education is more effective than infrastructure in changing the world. it is more effective for the government to invest in education than infrastructure because such an act generates greater long-term welfare. In the long term, people will be able to learn more knowledge, enhance their professional skills, and change the world they live in, instead of simply enjoying easier rides to wherever they would like to go. This is exactly the reason why we should spend more in education.
這道題除了萬金油觀點的第一個:effectiveness之外,還可以用很多其他的觀點。
比如第三個萬能觀點:technology and internet。大家可以說政府更多的投入到教育可以促進高科技快速發(fā)展,從而改變社會。
再比如第六個萬能觀點:social relationship。我們可以論述政府更多的投入教育可以讓人與人之間的差距更平等,narrow social gap.
這個方法可以用到托福各種題目的寫作當中,希望大家都能舉一反三,多多去練習吧!如果您對英語學習感興趣,想要深入學習,可以了解滬江網(wǎng)校精品課程,量身定制高效實用的個性化學習方案,專屬督導全程伴學,掃一掃領(lǐng)200暢學卡。