話題：已經(jīng)長(zhǎng)大成人的大學(xué)生顯然不愿意僅僅依靠父母的資助。課外時(shí)間，很多學(xué)生都會(huì)選擇做兼職工作，這一方面是撈點(diǎn)外快，另一方面也為了更好地鍛煉自己的能力。但是針對(duì)兼職不同人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。

參考范文一

??? As a college student, I want to make money to earn my living, because I am not the small kid any longer, I can work now. But I am a student, it is not possible for me to work all the time, so I can have a part-time job. Part-time job has advantage and disadvantage for me.
?? On the one hand, if I find a part-time job, I can make some money, so I can keep my ends meet and relieve my parents’ burden. My parents have paid for all my things, such as my education, my clothing and so on, all these things are great burden. So I find the part-time job to make my living, though not so much, for me, it is satisfying.
?? While on the other hand, I have to make out my study time to do the part-time job. As a student, my first job is to study, I must study hard, my parents have paid a lot on my education. The part-time job will certainly distract me at some level, I need to spare some time to do it.

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　? There are many advantages for a student to have a part time job.For instance,it helps him to realize that no success comes from nothing.It enables him to be independent and builds up his self-confidence. Therefore, part-time jobs cans get the students out of the ivory tower and give them the opportunity to know more of himself and of his personal value in society.
　 As everything has two sides,the disadvantages can't be ignored. First,part-time jobs sborten students' study time.Second, some even become so preoccupied with making money that they can't focus their attention on studying.In the end,the students may fal1 behind or fail in their studies.
　 Personally,I believe students can choose to take up a job according to their own situation.The most important thing is for him to keep a good balance,put his study on top of the list and assign an adequate amount of time to it.

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