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It will add 9 million jobs in the society,among which 5 million jobs are used to resolve the re-employment of laid-off workers. among改為of "be unfit for a higher post but unwilling to take a lower one " is seriously affected employment. affected改為affecting Part Ⅲ.A Firstly, integrity. Many graduates found that the employment with a certain certificate, diploma and resumes can be convenience to find a job.Some students in the college are working hard in order to obtain the relevant certificates. While some students are not assiduous,they defraud companies of the initial trust through opportunistic false or fraudulent claims,it damages the overall image of the college graduates. 這段話employment應(yīng)改為employees或candidates convenience改為convenient 最后的it改為which，為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句 Part Ⅲ.B Secondly, the overall quality of students are on a downward trend.Owing to the expansion of colleges, the expansion of college enrollment, the lower scores of entering ,and the fact that many college students do not work hard or lack of practical experience 第一句are改為is，主語(yǔ)是the overall quality owning to后面的整句話不是一個(gè)完整的句子，缺少謂語(yǔ)，這里最好把owning to...放在句首，然后接著the quality of.....，把兩句合為一句，作為一個(gè)因果關(guān)系。 Part Ⅴ In a nutshell, though people will never come to the same conclusion on the job hunting, as a problematic issue, my opinion is that it should depend on yourselves to find a job.When you are in front of your boss, you can say it confidentally, “Boss,that’s my job!” 這句話最后不應(yīng)該用confidentially，應(yīng)該用confidently。confidential意為“機(jī)密的”，這里應(yīng)該用confident“自信的”

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