【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思寫作】犯罪類真題9分范文
來源:滬江聽寫酷
2013-07-09 20:00
犯罪類真題
【Some?movies?increase?the?amount?of?bad?driving.?What?can?be?done?to?encourage?young?people?to?drive?more?safely?】
注意幾個詞匯的拼寫方式:
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Movies tend to have very large influence on young people who are influenced both by what they see and hear. Because this is the case, it is true that car chases in action movies tend to lead to an increase in the number of car accidents among young drivers because they try to copy what they have seen in the films. They drive too fast and take unnecessary risks and the difficulty is that most young people lack the skills and experience to do this.
There are a variety of ways in which young people can be encouraged to practise safer driving habits. Firstly, the government should launch a safe driving campaign to convey the fact that driving safely is not uncool. In effect, it should be cool to stay alive and healthy. Secondly, every movie should make it clear that dangerous car chases are undertaken only in strict safety conditions with experienced drivers, and often special movie-making tricks are used to enhance the action. Thirdly, young people should be forced to take safe driving courses every year for the first five years that they have their driver's licence. In this way, they are forced to perfect their driving skills or their licence will be taken away.
Finally, as part of this course, young drivers should go to hospitals and witness the effects of poor or dangerous driving on other people. When they see hospitalised people whose lives have been destroyed due to stupid risk-taking, they will surely change their minds about whether it is cool to copy action heroes and drive fast.
對于容易被所見所聞感染的年輕人來說,電影無疑對他們有著巨大的影響力。正因如此,由于年輕人樂于模仿他們在電影中看到的行為,所以電影中的各種追車鏡頭的確會刺激并導致越來越多的年輕人發(fā)生車禍。因為他們模仿電影中的鏡頭,傾向于開快車并且樂于做出那些沒有必要的、超出絕大多數(shù)年輕人駕駛能力的高難度駕駛動作。
要想鼓勵年輕人更多地養(yǎng)成安全駕駛的習慣,方法有很多。首先,政府可以啟動一項安全駕駛活動來向年輕人傳達出安全駕駛也很酷這樣一個信息。畢竟,能健康地活著才是最酷的。其次,每部電影都應該清楚地說明,電影中的追車鏡頭都是由極為專業(yè)的駕駛員在絕對安全的環(huán)境中做出的,同時,大部分鏡頭中還做了特效處理來加強視覺效果。第三,年輕人應該在其擁有駕照的前五年中每年必須參加一次安全駕駛課程。通過這種方法,他們會被強制完善他們的駕駛技巧或是被吊銷駕照。
最后,作為課程的一部分,年輕的駕駛員們會被安排參觀醫(yī)院來親眼看看那些不負責任的駕駛員對別人造成的傷害,甚至剝奪了別人的生命的時候,他們就肯定會對模仿那些酷酷的英雄主義駕駛行為改變看法了。