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雅思寫(xiě)作范文:交通堵塞為哪般?【小艾出品】
文中,如何把各種觀點(diǎn)思路理順,清晰地在文章中體現(xiàn)出來(lái),卻沒(méi)有聊天扯皮那么容易啦! 想想看,如果現(xiàn)在讓你口頭論述,你能說(shuō)明白個(gè)一二三不? 【范文】 (1) With the ever-increasing speed of urban development, the volume of road traffic in most cities and towns has grown out of control. During the rush hour, buses and private cars are always trapped in the traffic congestion where people waste hours every day just because of the poor road condition. This essay will explore the causes of this situation and some possible actions that can be taken to solve this problem. (2) To start with, the increasing number of private cars is the main cause of traffic jams. With the fast development of social economy, more citizens are able to afford private cars, which bring them great convenience. Instead of taking the sardine-packed buses or the metro to work, people now have the option to commute in their own cars. However, this new trend inevitably worsens the traffic.? (3) Another major cause of the high traffic volume is the over-population in large cities. Offering much more job opportunities with better career development, metropolises such as Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou have attracted millions of people from other parts of the country. Unfortunately, the public transportation systems in the cities are comparatively under-developed and cannot support the booming population, which naturally results in the traffic problem. (4) In order to alleviate the pressure on road traffic in towns and cities, the following suggestions should be taken into consideration. First of all, the government can discourage the citizens from owing and driving private cars by charging higher fees. In the meantime, the public transportation system should be upgraded so as to increase the total capacity. Moreover, the government can encourage the citizens to take buses or the metro to work by lowering the ticket prices. (5) In conclusion, the over-crowding of city roads is the result of unbalanced urban development, which can be solved with the joint efforts of both the government and the average citizens. 【解析】 本題為典型的“因果解決類(lèi)”(cause/effect & solution)題目,通常要求考生討論某問(wèn)題的原因、結(jié)果、解決方案等問(wèn)題。 許多同學(xué)對(duì)此類(lèi)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)安排存有疑惑,不知該寫(xiě)幾個(gè)主體段,每段該寫(xiě)什么內(nèi)容。事實(shí)上,比較容易掌握的寫(xiě)法是:有幾個(gè)問(wèn)題就寫(xiě)幾段,每段回答一個(gè)問(wèn)題。 當(dāng)然,對(duì)某些題目來(lái)說(shuō),如果你對(duì)某個(gè)問(wèn)題想說(shuō)的比較多,也可以用兩段來(lái)解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題,另一個(gè)問(wèn)題寫(xiě)一段即可。比如范文中就采用這種寫(xiě)法: (1) 總起。 (2) 原因A:私家車(chē)(private cars)數(shù)量激增。 (3) 原因B:城市人口越來(lái)越密集,而公共交通落后。 (4) 解決方案 1、2、3。 (5) 總結(jié)。 另外,與城市交通相關(guān)的詞匯你了解多少?Eileen老師在范文中“偷藏”了不少一般同學(xué)很少使用、但卻非常實(shí)用的詞匯,快雅來(lái)找一找吧~~ 往期范文回顧: 【雅思寫(xiě)作范文】社會(huì)發(fā)展靠神馬?>>> 【雅思寫(xiě)作范文】政府應(yīng)該為藝術(shù)買(mǎi)單?>>> ?
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精選英語(yǔ)作文范文10篇
無(wú)論是在學(xué)校還是在社會(huì)中,大家對(duì)作文都再熟悉不過(guò)了吧,寫(xiě)作文是培養(yǎng)人們的觀察力、聯(lián)想力、想象力、思考力和記憶力的重要手段。英語(yǔ)作文考察的是考生英語(yǔ)表達(dá)能力,大家平時(shí)可以多多收集相關(guān)的英語(yǔ)范文,以下是小編整理的關(guān)于英語(yǔ)作文范文10篇,供同學(xué)們參考。 1innovation With the economic globalization becoming increasingly intensive, invention or innovation has become one of central topic around the world. Many countries see
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雅思作文備考方法
雅思考試中,作文部分是非常有必要的,那么我們?nèi)绾蝹淇寄?下面是廣州朗閣雅思小編為大家整理的關(guān)于雅思作文目的理解是非常重要的一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)。 二、寫(xiě)作備考建議 1.考前預(yù)測(cè)的作文TOPICS 要認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備。 2.社會(huì),教育,文化藝術(shù)類(lèi)的高頻TOPICS準(zhǔn)備。 3.每天100-200背誦輸入和默寫(xiě)(套句,閱讀好詞句段。) 4.選典型題目寫(xiě)至少10-15篇(劍橋作文題目或者今年考過(guò)的題目),形成自己的一套句式,寫(xiě)法。 5.每天背一篇重要的典型的小作文(G類(lèi)是各種書(shū)信,A類(lèi)是曲線,柱圖,數(shù)據(jù)圖,流程圖等各類(lèi)范文)和大作文,比較好能復(fù)述或默寫(xiě)出來(lái)。 三、寫(xiě)作注意事項(xiàng) 1、字?jǐn)?shù) 從下表可以看出對(duì)于Task1來(lái)說(shuō),141-150字是不會(huì)因?yàn)樽謹(jǐn)?shù)原因丟分的。但是!如果你的字?jǐn)?shù)低于140字就要開(kāi)始扣分了。同理,在Task2中241-250字不會(huì)扣分~所以,對(duì)于那些差2-3個(gè)字到達(dá)
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雅思小作文的技巧
求和考場(chǎng)特點(diǎn)的技巧。以下是滬江小編整理的雅思寫(xiě)作技巧。 一、雅思小作文的技巧 I .Describing trend 描寫(xiě)趨勢(shì); 2. Describing data / figure 描寫(xiě)數(shù)據(jù); 3. Describing proportion 描寫(xiě)比例; 4. Describing location and its change 描寫(xiě)方位及其變化; 5. Describing sequence 描寫(xiě)流程或者順序; 6. Describing parts of devices 描述裝置功能; 7. Paragraphing and Cohesion 使段落和句式連貫; 8. Vocabulary and Grammar use 使詞匯和句式多樣化 二、大作文寫(xiě)作涉及的一些重要技巧 1. Understand instruction 理解題目說(shuō)明; 2. Analyse the topic 分析題目; 3. Form ideas quickly 快速形成觀點(diǎn)、尋找論據(jù); 4. Plan an essay 安排段落結(jié)構(gòu); 5. Paragraph 寫(xiě)好英文段落; 6. Use linkers 運(yùn)用連接詞; 7. Use vocabulary 使用詞匯; 8. Build complex sentences 寫(xiě)出復(fù)雜句. 幾乎任何一本雅思寫(xiě)作學(xué)習(xí)書(shū)籍都會(huì)涉及以上一些技巧。但是,任何寫(xiě)作技巧的學(xué)習(xí)都不能代替句子寫(xiě)作水平的提高和詞匯準(zhǔn)確豐富的使用。這也就是為什么有時(shí)候?qū)W習(xí)了一些理論性的技巧之后,很多同學(xué)還是不能夠?qū)懗龊玫?span style="color: #fe6016">作文的緣由。對(duì)于詞匯和句式,筆者的意見(jiàn)是重在積累。具體地說(shuō): ?1.決不能死記單個(gè)詞匯,要在閱讀范文或者時(shí)事英文報(bào)刊時(shí)摘錄短語(yǔ)搭配。 ?2.反復(fù)做句子英漢互譯練習(xí),思考并積累中英文思維與句型表達(dá)上的差異。 ?3.多做從句的分解和句子的合并的練習(xí)。本書(shū)就提供了大量這樣的練習(xí)。 ?4.閱讀過(guò)程中,多思考、比較段落間
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雅思大作文點(diǎn)評(píng)——漲價(jià)是否是解決環(huán)境問(wèn)題的方法
有點(diǎn)不自然,而且后面是用完成時(shí)似乎也不對(duì)。試改為:there is still more or less pollution. ) And, the radical approach to the environmental problems lies with the environmental awareness of producers. With the broad awareness about the importance of sustainable development, producers are willing to develop renewable energy resources, instead of being compelled to carry out the environmental policy established by the government, which is more effective but more difficult to reach. ( 長(zhǎng)句,大家欣賞一下吧。) So, the environmental problems can be solved by the rise in price of fuel partially, but not radically. And then, better to take advantage to all the price mechanism, administration and the public's knowledge, than to make use of only one of them. 點(diǎn)評(píng): 最后一段是敗筆,或者說(shuō)明顯寫(xiě)的沒(méi)前面幾段好! 試改為:Therefore, raising fuel price can, to some extent, tackle the environmental problems but is far from thoroughly and the combination of price mechanism, administration and public knowledge is much better than make use of merely one of them. 綜合評(píng)定:8分。 這篇文章整體來(lái)說(shuō)寫(xiě)的很好,作者寫(xiě)作功底很深,對(duì)長(zhǎng)句、復(fù)雜句等句型運(yùn)用的得心應(yīng)手。整篇文章,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,用詞簡(jiǎn)單但能表達(dá)廣度。不過(guò)在冠詞方面的欠缺是一個(gè)遺憾。 2015新年課程優(yōu)惠 獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)100%購(gòu)課學(xué)幣 課程詳情 獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)100%購(gòu)課學(xué)幣 課程詳情 400元抵扣1900元 點(diǎn)擊搶購(gòu) 400元抵扣1900元 點(diǎn)擊搶購(gòu) 更多優(yōu)惠雅思課程>>>
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雅思作文題目匯總
度上使社會(huì)受益? 題目十四 Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 雇主應(yīng)該給員工每年至少4周的假期,讓員工更好地工作。你在多大程雅思寫(xiě)作考試中,小作文考試難度一般,但是我們也不能忽視這部分的備考。今天為大家整理了15篇雅思小作文度上同意或不同意? 題目十五 Some people think it is a valuable experience to travel abroad, whereas others believe it is a waste of time and expense since people already have TV programs and the internet nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 有些人認(rèn)為出國(guó)旅行是一次寶貴的經(jīng)歷,而另一些人則認(rèn)為這是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和費(fèi)用,因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)在人們已經(jīng)有了電視節(jié)目和互聯(lián)網(wǎng)。討論兩種觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。 以上就是為大家總結(jié)的十五個(gè)雅思小作文題目,這些題目?jī)H供大家參考,希望可以幫助到大家,提升雅思小作文寫(xiě)作了解,順利通過(guò)考試。
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美國(guó)老師的雅思作文范文賞析
過(guò)了,那么這一段最好是正面地論證自己的觀點(diǎn)。此外,需要說(shuō)明的是,作者的內(nèi)容還是有一定深度,但是這是要有一定的英語(yǔ)功底才行的。如果英語(yǔ)功底不行的話,建議內(nèi)容不雅思作文要寫(xiě)太深,因?yàn)槟菢尤菀自斐煽脊倏床欢阍谡f(shuō)什么。 A poor child may believe that one can get along, if not as easily, without wealth. A wealthy child may be well trained by a parent steeped in the knowledge of money management; the key to developing this skill is education. 點(diǎn)評(píng):最后一段有點(diǎn)像是提出解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題的辦法,即 education. 它沒(méi)有像傳統(tǒng)的結(jié)尾段那樣簡(jiǎn)單的重申自己的觀點(diǎn)。 總結(jié):作者很明顯是不贊成題目的說(shuō)法,但是作者自己是更偏向窮人家的孩子呢,還是富人家的孩子呢?根據(jù)文章來(lái)看,作者是中立,他所看重的是他們所接受的教育。整篇文章是一個(gè)中立的寫(xiě)法。在雅思考試中,這種寫(xiě)法經(jīng)常使用,還是非常實(shí)用的,大家可以學(xué)習(xí)一下。此外,文章中有很多好詞好句,特別是長(zhǎng)句,值得模仿一下。
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怎樣提升雅思作文分?jǐn)?shù)呢
上有個(gè)叫大漠的把劍1-7的范文全都羅列出來(lái),并細(xì)細(xì)品位了一番,找不到的找我要~)。 7.5的,7分的sample也是可以看看感受一下的啦~分低的就不要去瞄了,不吉利~~ 其他還可以接觸的材料有寫(xiě)作替換詞匯什么的,網(wǎng)上應(yīng)該有很多的,但我覺(jué)得還是自己親自總結(jié)比較好, 我目前就總結(jié)了個(gè)make可以在不同況下變成yield, neccessitate, render== 考了兩次雅思,一次是animal test,一次是increasing working time 思路基本上是以下這樣的, 開(kāi)頭就是先描述這個(gè)現(xiàn)象, 然后說(shuō)說(shuō)它的原因, 再思路打不開(kāi),各類(lèi)的范文看了再看,還是感覺(jué)不會(huì)寫(xiě)雅思作文接著是利和弊,分兩段,利和弊中間的過(guò)渡可以裝得糾結(jié)一點(diǎn),兩者之間透露出你的立場(chǎng), 像(While I admit that,,, I am convinced that …) 外加給些solution,無(wú)非就是政府介入,raise awareness什么的, 最后來(lái)個(gè)歡快結(jié)個(gè)尾,兩句話以上。 結(jié)合經(jīng)驗(yàn)和自己的實(shí)際情況來(lái)學(xué)習(xí),一定會(huì)成功的! 以上就是為大家整理的提升雅思作文分?jǐn)?shù)的方法,希望能夠?qū)Υ蠹业膫淇加兴鶐椭?。雅思?xiě)作不僅需要足夠的詞匯量,還需要掌握一定的方法和技巧,只有做好充足的準(zhǔn)備,才能夠在雅思考試中取得好的成績(jī)。
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雅思大作文備考方法
要是掌握考試主題,了解考試題目的命題思路,是把握當(dāng)前趨勢(shì)的關(guān)鍵。有關(guān)最近考試的信息可以在網(wǎng)上獲得,并提供最新的、完整的答案。 考生可以在網(wǎng)上找到最新試題的詳細(xì)解釋和相關(guān)優(yōu)秀范文。在此基礎(chǔ)上,應(yīng)多練習(xí)并進(jìn)行頭腦風(fēng)暴,快速寫(xiě)出大綱。一般每個(gè)題目可以選擇2 - 3個(gè)練習(xí),根據(jù)近期的中英文閱讀材料積累材料。 4、連接詞的積累 首先,通過(guò)閱讀相關(guān)書(shū)籍,收集并列、扭轉(zhuǎn)、舉例、因果等常用短語(yǔ),并區(qū)分它們的用法。如果總思分為7分,可以增加雅思閱讀試卷的精讀量,掌握多種銜接手段。 此外,通過(guò)閱讀文章來(lái)積累主題詞匯也是必要的。通過(guò)指導(dǎo)和自己的理解,可以掌握全文的主題信息,不會(huì)經(jīng)常重復(fù)相同的主題詞匯。 5、詞匯表 詞匯的積累是全面的。如果考生具備了基本的詞匯知識(shí),他就可以通過(guò)不斷的閱讀來(lái)積累詞匯的正確使用意義。當(dāng)然,這是一個(gè)長(zhǎng)期的過(guò)程,沒(méi)有實(shí)際的范圍。在時(shí)間有限的情況下,建議完成第四部分連詞和主題詞的積累。 上述就是為大家介紹的雅思大作文備考方法,大家都掌握了嗎?希望以上的內(nèi)容能夠切實(shí)幫助到大家,提升雅思大作文的寫(xiě)作。
2020-11-02 -
雅思口語(yǔ)范文:Describe a Family
下面一篇雅思口語(yǔ)經(jīng)典話題的范文。雅思口語(yǔ)范文:Describe a Family,這篇雅思口語(yǔ)范文的主要內(nèi)容是描述一些描述家庭方雅思口語(yǔ)經(jīng)典話題的范文。雅思口語(yǔ)范文:Describe a Family,這篇雅思口語(yǔ)范文面的內(nèi)容。這考生可以根據(jù)自己所掌握的知識(shí)和經(jīng)歷,用例子和證據(jù)來(lái)支持自己的觀點(diǎn),下面我們就一起來(lái)看看下面的雅思口語(yǔ)范文是如何描述的吧。 What is Family? How do you define a [w]family[/w]? People who care and love each other with a heart filled with respect 。 I would define my Family as a breath of fresh air! People who you hate most of the time, but are forced to love unconditionally : Bunch of people who will make you sometimes happy, sometimes sad but are always there when you need them, when you are going through good times and bad. The ones that are there for you all your life through good and bad. they love and care for you even if you are the most hated person in the world, and always have a shoulder to lean on. Some words to describe Family ! fun, loving, caring, compassionate, thoughtful, wonderful exciting, joyful, protective, loving, functional togetherness, lovable, trustworthy, funny, adventuress, spontanious, fun filled, hilarious, god‘s angelsm, comforting Say something about your Family! My maternal grandfather’s ancestor came from.。. My family is big and hectic, but we‘re always there for each other. definately protective. Unconventional, free-spirited, slightly bonkers, and occasionally irritating. But compassionate, well-meaning and generally pretty great. We’re not wealthy in assets, but we are richest in unity and support. Mostly we just get together for major family events. My immediately family is kind of large and I would not consider us close, though many outsiders do. I guess we are at least rather involved in each other‘s lives for people to say that. However, each of us is an individual and independent of the others, so that’s what makes me say that we are not close. We get along, in general, though. That is the important thing. And even within the immediate family, we‘re not especially close, we just kind of sit around and have meaningless conversations, and the closest we ever come to actual ’family time‘ anymore is maybe sitting down to play a few argument-filled hands of Gin Rummy. 以上即是雅思口語(yǔ)話題Describe a Family方面的范文介紹,字?jǐn)?shù)不是很多,但是可取之處在于結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,例子也很恰當(dāng),大家可以在備考相關(guān)的雅思口語(yǔ)話題的時(shí)候,對(duì)上面的雅思口語(yǔ)范文進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)膮⒖肌?