名言諺語式作文這種命題形式在大學(xué)英語四六級考試中均出現(xiàn)過，在復(fù)習(xí)備考中值得關(guān)注。以下再選編一篇六級諺語作文作為備考作文之一，該作文主題涉及“如何克服困難/障礙”，這與當前中國所面對的西方國家尤其是美國的貿(mào)易打壓這一國際形式有一定相關(guān)性。建議在閱讀范文的過程中關(guān)注其立論方式及作文結(jié)構(gòu)安排。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on obstacles by referring to the saying "Obstacles are things a person sees when he takes his eyes off his goal." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to overcome obstacles. You should illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to overcome obstacles. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.?

寫作思路：

這是一篇名言分析型作文。根據(jù)寫作要求來看，考生首先需要就“當人的視線不放在目標上時，他就看到了障礙”這句名言作出評論，提出自己的觀點并舉例加以闡述，最后說明能做些什么來克服障礙。文章可做如下結(jié)構(gòu)安排：

第一段：簡單引述名言

第二段：論證名言，并舉例說明

第三段：講述自己會怎樣克服障礙。

?參考范文：

There is asaying that goes, "Obstacles are things a person sees when he takes his eyes off his goal." Simple as it sounds, the intended meaning is more than profound.

It is indicated in the quote that if we stick tour goal, we will triumph over any adversity and no longer see them as obstacles. For instance, I once, had to make a tough decision after my failure in the college entrance examination :to accept what life throws at me or to try it again. Since college was my dream, finally I decided to do it again despite the prospect that I had to bear more pressure than ever. Life didn't let me down again due to my determination and hard work.

?Adversity is a challenge for cowards but an opportunity for the brave. Therefore, every time adversity blocks my way, I always tell myself not to fear and keep reminding myself of where I am heading. Moreover, I will cope with obstacles by analyzing the problems and finding the solution to them. I have faith that I can overcome any obstacle and finally get to my destination.

?范文譯文：

有句名言說得好:"當人的視線不放在目標上時，他就看到了阻礙"。話聽起單,其意義卻非常深遠。

這句引言暗示我們，如果堅持目標不放手，我們將戰(zhàn)勝任何逆境，且不會再逆境視作阻礙。比如,在高考失利之后,我曾經(jīng)不得不做出一個艱難的抉擇：接受這一切，還是從頭再來? 因為大學(xué)一直是我的夢想，所以我決定從頭再來，盡管不承受前所未有的壓力。由于我的決心和刻苦，生活沒有再次讓我失望。

逆境對于懦弱者來說是挑戰(zhàn)，而對于勇敢者來說是機遇。因此，每當逆境來總是告訴自己不要害怕，并時刻提醒自己前進的方向。除此之外，我還將通過分析問題和尋找解決問題的方法來應(yīng)對各種阻礙。我相信我能戰(zhàn)勝任何阻礙并最終抵達目的地。?