托福寫作培訓(xùn):如何讓文章更出彩
在托福寫作中,除了首段和尾段,文章的中心段落是最為重要的一部分。只有在這部分表達(dá)好,才能得到最好的分?jǐn)?shù)。在托福寫作中如何把文章主題表達(dá)的更好?如何讓文章更出彩呢?下面就讓我們一起來看看吧,說不定對你有幫助呢。
一、舉實(shí)例
思維短路,舉實(shí)例!提出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn),舉實(shí)例!提出一個(gè)方案,舉實(shí)例!而且者也是我們揭示一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)最好的方式,任何情況下,只要我們無法繼續(xù)文章,不管三七二十一,盡管舉例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
更多句型:
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比較
方法:寫完一個(gè)要點(diǎn),比較與之相似的;又寫完一個(gè)要點(diǎn),再比較與之相反的;
世界上沒有同樣的指紋,沒有相同的樹葉,文章亦同,只有通過比較,你才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點(diǎn)(through comparison)和不同點(diǎn)(through contrast)。下面是一些短語:
相似的比較:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三、換言之
沒話說了,可以換一句話再說,讓你的文章在多一些字,或者文鄒鄒地說,是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點(diǎn)。
實(shí)際就是重復(fù)重復(fù)再重復(fù)!下面的句子實(shí)際上就三個(gè)字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我們舉過的例子:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短語表達(dá):I cannot put up with it.
因此可以這樣說:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短語:
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
托福寫作考試中文章的內(nèi)容必須充實(shí),只有言之有物,才能不是自己的托福作文顯得特別的蒼白空洞。多看一些相關(guān)的范文對自己的寫作是有幫助的,取其精華去其糟粕,讓自己的行文流暢精彩。滬江小編建議大家勤于練習(xí)。